On Monday after morning tea Te Wairua Pakiki 6 played Ki-O-Rahi.
Coach Shanice coached us for Ki-O-Rahi. Te Wairua Pakiki 6 played Ki-O-Rahi on the field,
but we didn’t play first. We listened to the rules of Ki-O-Rahi,
then Coach Shanice split us into 2 teams. Then Coach Shanice told 1 team to go
between the red cones and the other team to go between the yellow cones.
I was chosen to go to the red cones, then we played. When we played Everly and Pauliasi
had to guard the Tupu (the rock). When I was playing I felt excited! and tired at the same time.
Coach Shanice coached us for Ki-O-Rahi. Te Wairua Pakiki 6 played Ki-O-Rahi on the field,
but we didn’t play first. We listened to the rules of Ki-O-Rahi,
then Coach Shanice split us into 2 teams. Then Coach Shanice told 1 team to go
between the red cones and the other team to go between the yellow cones.
I was chosen to go to the red cones, then we played. When we played Everly and Pauliasi
had to guard the Tupu (the rock). When I was playing I felt excited! and tired at the same time.
Hi Jonah,
ReplyDeleteIt’s me Isitolo, I like how your writing you have shared with us.
Maybe next time work on making it look more interesting.
Can’t wait to see your next post!
Keep up the Good work.
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ReplyDeleteHi Jonah wow I liked how you did you Punctuation properly and that a cool piucture you have there but Jonah you should have put more details and keep up the good work and also whats up 1st ever king nub
ReplyDeleteHi Jonah,
ReplyDeleteI like the details you shared in your wonderful story,
maybe next you can probably make your story a bit bigger.
But anyways keep on improving.
Hi Jonah I really like the story that you did
ReplyDeleteit really cool
ReplyDeleteabout Chinese people how they were spilt in to two teams and i could also see they were really trying cause they are sweating so much but i really like your story about them.
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